Steve Neiderhauser

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Paragraph Art

Jonathan Morrow writes about The Art of the Paragraph. He provides five guidelines for paragraphs.

Have you ever dreaded attending a meeting just because of the sound of the leader's voice or because he spoke in an dull monotone.

Boring.

Well, a writer can make you skip the written page if every sentence in a paragraph is the same length. Instead, here's Mr. Morrow's tip to add rhythm to your writing:

Paragraphs are the vocal inflections of the written word. Good writers vary the length of their paragraphs to show the reader what’s important. Some paragraphs will be 3-5 sentences, but every once in a while, they’ll throw in a one-sentence paragraph in order to emphasize a particular point. It stands out, and it tells the reader to pay attention.

November 28, 2009 in Marketing | Permalink | Comments (0) | TrackBack (0)

Who else wants to learn the Presentation Secrets of Steve Jobs

People will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.

— Maya Angelou

Have you ever wondered how Steve Jobs captivates an audience. When you read The Presentation Secrets of Steve Jobs, you will learn proven techniques, giving you a competitive advantage.

Carmine Gallo structures the book like a classic three act story with scenes representing chapters. At the end of each scene, director’s notes enlighten the actor’s role like a Frank Darabont Shooting Script.

Because Carmine uses a teaching structure that parallels a Steve Jobs’ presentation, students will absorb lessons like a thirsty sponge. If the United States Government had this kind of delivery system for vaccines, the H1N1 virus would be a distant, dust-blown memory.

I want to tell you a secret about this book, a secret that will help you reach career goals. Before I reveal the secret, let’s review the book’s three acts.

Act 1: Create the Story

I’ve always been amazed by the parallels between story and selling solutions to business problems. Carmen’s book reinforces my sense of wonder about story and how we can create stories for business purposes.

In Act I, the author focuses on how to create a story for a presentation. What’s the most important question we can ask in relation to the story? Here it is: Why should the customer care?

Screenwriters ask a similar question based on the fact that all stories are about solving a problem. Is the problem a story-worthy problem? If someone has lost a cell phone and there’s no significant problem, who cares. How can you spin surprises from dross?

On the other hand, if an asteroid the size of Texas is rocketing toward earth, now you have customers who bolt upright and say, “Man, how are you gonna solve that problem?” James Bonnet writes that in solving the problem the solution formula is revealed. Elegant solutions contribute to the power of the story.

In the book, you see how Apple solves story-worthy problems with elegant products. And this problem-solution formula often leads to buzz-worthy catchphrases:

“New iPod Puts 1,000 Songs in Your Pocket.”

Act 2: Deliver the Experience

Steve Jobs uses a presentation as a delivery mechanism for experiences much like a director uses a movie to deliver emotions to an audience.

Mr. Gallo describes six scenes or concepts you can use to design the experience. Let’s look at three of them.

Simplicity - Jobs is known for eliminating extra bells and whistles from software and hardware products. Notice the elegance of the iPod interface. This design philosophy is reflected in his words and slides. He may put a lone word on a slide, “iTunes,” for example, or a picture of a MacBook Air. A sole picture provides the flexibility to speak freely while aligning with educational psychology principles.

Use Zippy Words - The words you choose also determine the quality of your performance. Screenwriters will go to great lengths to assure each character’s dialogue is artistically treated. Fragments, implied dialogue, and analogies are just a few of the techniques a screenwriter will call upon.

Carmine provides examples of Steve speaking at presentations:

  • “Plug it in. Wirrrrrr. Done.”
  • “iPod is the size of a deck of cards.”
  • “We made the buttons on the screen look so good, you’ll want to lick them.”

    Steve speaks naturally. At times, even in fragments. And he crafts colorful language to bring features to life.

    Reveal a Surprise Moment - Jobs loves to reveal surprises. In fact, he scripts moments to elevate the drama. For an example of this scene, consider MacWorld 2007 and the way Steve introduced the iPhone. For tips on reversals, drama, and surprises watch the movie North by Northwest and see how the master directed drama.

    Mr. Gallo’s point is this: The way you design your slides, your words, your surprises determines the quality of the presentation.

    Act 3: Refine and Rehearse

    The author cites research that it takes about ten thousand hours of practice to master any skill or talent. I believe there’s one other quality that separates the mediocre from the masters. Top business professionals often posses the ability to organize information in a way that makes it easy for others to learn. Think of Steve Jobs. He takes complex technical information and transforms it into a performance that’s educational and entertaining.

    Consider for a moment the author of this book. Mr. Gallo is a recognized expert in his field. What sets him apart? Is it the information in the book? That may be part of it, however, I think it’s the way he organizes the information, the way he presents the information, the way he shapes the information.

    Truth is, I have a feeling that “The Presentation Secrets of Steve Jobs” will become one of the most influential books about presentation skills. Why?  Because throughout the book Carmine uses a powerful teaching concept.

    Write about a presentation principle, then tell a story to demonstrate the principle.  There are many good stories in the book... the stories alone will amplify learning. And yet, the author turns it up a notch by using a third teaching concept. He directs people to a video of a Steve Jobs’ presentation where Steve is using the concept as one of his colors on the palette of presentation.

  • Principle
  • Story
  • Model

    Now students can actually model Steve's presentation dunks, just like school kids across America’s playgrounds imitated an electrifying, gravity defying Michael Jordan dunk.

    And the book does something that all great stories do, it shows the transformation of Jobs’ presentation skills.  From the 1984 Macintosh presentation (considered one of the best) to present- day presentations where Steve's skills are at their highest art form.  

    Let’s pretend the picture of Jobs dressed in a white shirt, bow tie, and double-breasted jacket for his 1984 presentation is the opening image of a movie. And the final image of the movie is Jobs dressed in his current performance suite — Black turtleneck, blue jeans, and white sneakers. In between the opening and final images is a story, a transformation engine holding the solution formula for becoming a presentation artist.

    Next time you’re watching a movie, compare the first and final images. Then ask yourself, What transformation message is the movie sending to my subconscious?

    One Last Thing

    Just one last thing... At the start of this review, I promised to reveal a secret about the book. If the only thing this book did was gift wrap the presentation secrets of Steve Jobs that would be enough, wouldn’t it? In addition to making good on its promise, this book holds a second benefit: The book — and Carmine — show you how to live your life as an artist.

    Why would we need to live as artists? Isn’t delivering products on time enough? Not anymore. Dan Pink writes convincingly about how we have moved from the information age to the age of the artist. And in this new age, story and design are skills that separate you from the sea of sameness. Jobs thinks of himself as an artist. Instead of products, his teams create works of art.

    Products and presentations are table stakes. Today, you have to artistically treat your products and direct your presentations like a classic story. We no longer sell products or services, we sell dreams and experiences. We are creating delivery mechanisms for customer experiences. Using Steve Jobs as our model, let’s design experiences that delight customers.

    Suspense. Curiosity. Surprise.

    You don’t have to wait for your first keynote speech to practice the techniques in Carmine’s book. You can use his concepts to artistically treat all your work and produce remarkable experiences. Use the rule of three in an email, design software with Zen-like simplicity, orchestrate demos that thrill your customers. Your design and presentation skills will grow stronger, preparing you for that glorious moment in the theater of marketing.

    Even though people may forget what you said, and people may forget what you did, it’s how you designed what you said and did that will sear the experience into your customer’s memory.

    People will always remember how you make them feel. Make them feel great.

  • November 01, 2009 in Marketing, Product Management | Permalink | Comments (0) | TrackBack (0)

    Start with the story ending

    Some experts coach writers to create the end of their story first so they know the story ending before they start to write their screenplay or novel.

    John Irving takes it one step further in his latest novel, Last Night in Twisted River. In this Good Morning America video, Mr. Irving says that before he writes the first sentence of the novel, he writes the last sentence first.

    October 30, 2009 in Marketing | Permalink | Comments (0) | TrackBack (0)

    Kokin Floppy Hat

    Unlike the hat-wearing dog in Go, Dog. Go!, ladies who wear this Kokin classic won't have to ask anyone, "Do you like my hat?"

    Kokin Floppy Hat.jpg

    I know little about haute couture or hat couture. Although, I do know something about design so when I saw the above hat, I was impressed by the design, craftsmanship, and quality of work.

    In his book Purple Cow, Seth Godin conveys this concept about great marketing: The marketing is built right in the product. The product is the marketing.

    Now, I imagine when a lady wears the Kokin Cartwheel hat, she won't have to say, "Do you like my hat?" Instead, women — and even some men — will say to her, "I like your hat. Where did you find it?"

    Who knew Go, Dog. Go! is really a management book.

    October 14, 2009 in Marketing | Permalink | Comments (1) | TrackBack (0)

    Imagination — Our sixth sense

    Seth Godin calls out three talents that will keep you employed.

    Let's focus on the third skill: Initiation. Here's what Seth had to write about Initiation.

    The third skill is the most difficult to value, but is ultimately the most valuable. If you're the person who can initiate useful action, if you're the one who makes something productive or transformative happen, then smart organizations will treasure you.

    To me, initiation is imagination mixed with the courage to act on the ideas that pulse into your heart. Great athletes, like Tiger Woods or Magic Johnson, exhibit the creativity and imagination to strike a stunning golf shot or make a no-look pass on a fast break. That no-look pass is an example of Magic extending his imagination onto the playing court of reality.

    When people in an company look around and mistakenly believe that the procedures and processes they see are reality, they allow the gears of industry to grind their genius into gruel. To initiate useful action, sometimes you have to ignore the obvious and imagine the future.

    Tiger Woods, for example, started to practice visualization from an early age, helping him to transform golf and shape his career. Several months ago I ran across a book called Immortal Man, by Neville Goddard. Now, you may not agree with all the teachings of Neville, but he does provide some powerful insights regarding imagination and visualization.

    Neville quotes that famous change agent, Winston Churchill: "The mood determines the fortunes of people." Imagine Churchill relying only on his five senses during World War II and speaking to the people of England from the firestorm that had enveloped London. Instead, Churchill ignored the facts, and captured the mood of a free and victorious England.

    Neville taught one thing that many people leave out of visualizations. Act as though your goal has already come true, then feel what it would be like to have accomplished your goal. Here's Neville in his own words:

    Assume the feeling of the wish fulfilled and simply ignore everything that denies it. Then I am calling a thing that is not now seen as though it were seen, and that unseen state will become seen.

    October 11, 2009 in Marketing | Permalink | Comments (0) | TrackBack (0)

    Presentation Secrets of Steve Jobs

    Carmine Gallo shares the communication secrets that make Steve Jobs the most admired speaker today.

    Mr. Gallo writes about sharing the stage, making the numbers meaningful, and the rule of three.

    "Friends, Romans, countrymen, lean me your ears" is a famous line from a Shakespeare play and shows how the rule of three encompasses everyone who would be listening to the speech.

    Copywriting also talks about the power of three. Describing a product in terms of two benefits, makes it seem as though the product is lacking something. Four benefits seems like you are trying too hard and may be covering a flaw. Describing a product with three benefits feels just right, and gives a sense of completeness.

    From a gestalt psychology perspective we have closure. Two points form a line, while three points allow the triangle of completeness to be drawn.

    October 05, 2009 in Marketing | Permalink | Comments (0) | TrackBack (0)

    Wear the suit of innovation

    If there's anyone who should know how to survive in an economic downtown, surely it would be the designers of high fashion. Who needs a new ensemble when people can't assemble enough money to pay rent?

    This men's fashion article captures the wisdom to moving forward in trying or terrific times:

    "You have to fight the crisis with creativity, with the best materials."

    — Roberto Cavalli

    Words that business executives should wear in all seasons like a suit of innovation.

    September 29, 2009 in Marketing | Permalink | Comments (0) | TrackBack (0)

    How to create great demos

    Guy Kawasaki gives us Five Things Not To Do in a Demo.

    A pattern develops early in his article — "Get right to it."

    Meandering about like you're some lazy river on a Sunday afternoon will put your audience to sleep. In fact, movies have trained us to expect an opening that gets right to it.

    So we can learn from how good authors open their stories and apply those concepts to presentations.

    September 12, 2009 in Marketing | Permalink | Comments (0) | TrackBack (0)

    Benefits of Blogging

    In this interview, Seth Godin and Tom Peters describe the benefits of blogging. Mr. Peters declares that starting a blog in 2004 was one of his best business decisions.

    In addition to its marketing benefits, blogging helps you organize your thoughts, expand your horizon of understanding, and practice your craft.

    August 08, 2009 in Marketing | Permalink | Comments (0) | TrackBack (0)

    Analogies used for Descriptions

    Several years ago, I bought a little blue book from Amazon called, The Analogy Book of Related Words. Unfortunately, it now looks like the book is only available from third parties.

    When beginning to write a description, thinking of analogies or metaphors will help you paint a fresh, vivid portrait of your scene. Just flipping through the different categories in the book — from Acting to Zodiac — will help you think of your writing in the light of analogies. Who knows what clichés you will avoid, and what words of delight you will create.

    Let's look at an example from the book:

    His face was etched with the erosion of many years. Gray had almost overtaken his copper hair... Even before he spoke you sensed this was a man of iron. When he began to address the crowd, he words were as hot and flowing as molten lava.

    July 05, 2009 in Marketing | Permalink | Comments (0) | TrackBack (0)

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